Creative writing adventure story

So in my creative writing class we had to write an adventure story, and here's a sample :) enjoy~


A young sandy colored cat named Finn wandered about his house. He stared up at the squishy sofa, wondering if he should sleep on that or the comfy chair. Eventually he chose the chair. Sighing, he curled up in a neat ball and his eyes closed. The tom cat drifted into a deep sleep.
When he awoke a loud noise was bothering him. It was the barking of a dog. Annoyed, he stood up stretching and leaped gracefully off the chair, landing expertly. As he walked into the food room, where he eats and drinks, the yapping got louder. Soon he was facing the large invisible doors that kept him from leaving the house. The barking was clear as a whistle. Finn scratched and clawed at the door, eager to see the dog. He had seen lots of them on the moving screen in front of the sofa, but he had never seen one up close. A drafty breeze blue through his fur. He closed his exotic green eyes, loving the crisp air. Wait- air! That means something has to be open! His eyes gazed around the room until he spotted where the breeze came from, a window! He had to get up onto that counter somehow, without hurting himself. The sandy tom bunched up his muscles and took one great leap. He barely made it to the counter. Finally he reached the open window, and with one bound he was peering into the outdoors. There wasn't all lot to see considering this was the backyard. Now the yapping and barking was clearer than ever. He jumped down to the ground and gazed around the lush yard. It was full of foliage, like a jungle. It was also fenced in by a white fence. In the back corner seemed to be what was called a tree. He sniffed the air, so that's what dogs smell like, a horrible stench if you ask him. Finn saw movement behind the fence. With one mighty leap he jumped up onto the picket fence and looked around. It was another yard! And there, barking and hopping below him, was a dog.